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ok, this is a work in progress, but im not too sure about the first few lines, (ill address it after the lyrics.)

He had love in his eyes and lust in his heart
she couldnt see him for what he was
He made her promises he would not keep,
but she was a wishful thinker.

& when it was over
& when he was gone,
she knew what he had done.
He had tricked her heart
He had tricked her soul
He had tricked her into believing.

& now she knows
forever is just a phase in her life
& now she knows
together is something we say when its not right

i have more, but that part i can work on on my own. =]
so, the first line-should it be 'love in his eyes & lust in his heart' or 'lust in his heart & love in his eyes.
the second line-whenever i sing it it comes out 'couldnt see him for what he was for.' does that make any sense?
the third line-should it be 'promises he would not keep' or 'promises he would never keep'

(i wrote this a while ago, but i wanted to put more lyrics up, and most everything i have now is incomplete)

filled with fear
wont you come here
wipe away my tear
help me perservere

[chorus]
i need you now
i need you then
please allow
me to need you again

dont leave me alone
with the unknown
ill be your own
id break through stone

ill admit i was wrong
im sorry im strong
can i sing you song
wont you sing along

filled with fear
wont you come here
wipe away my tear
help me perservere

[chorus]

dont leave me alone
with the unknown
ill be your own
id break through stone

dont leave me dying
dont leave me crying
ill keep trying
ill stop denying

[chorus]

i want to hold your hand
i want this to expand
just as we had planned
do you understand

i need you now
i need you then
please allow
me to need you again

dont you get it
even a little bit
oh baby please dont quit
this time its legit

filled with fear
wont you come here
wipe away my tear
help me perservere

[chorus]

dont leave me alone
with the unknown
ill be your own
id break through stone

ill admit i was wrong
im sorry im strong
can i sing you song
wont you sing along

[chorus] x3

so, im completely broke right now,
but after this summer i plan on getting recording equipment.
but for right now, i really want to put up some music.
just so people can hear what the lyrics sound like sung.
anyways...my question...
would it be possible to record it on my cell phone and then transfer it to the comp?
i had a microphone for my computer that i could have used, but my puppy ate it.
i got another, and she ate that too...
so, for the meantime, is it possible to use a cell?
or is that just completely ludicrous?

We're living in a land with mountain majesties,
rainbows growing out of trees.
And you like it
Yes you like it (oh oh)

We've got shooting stars and a unicorn,
this is the place where love is born.
Do you like it?
Yes you like it (oh oh)

We've got a sun that shines day and night,
this is the place where dream take flight.
And you like it
Yes we like it (oh oh)

Now if you'll go ahead and please look twice,
There's always a storm in paradise.
Yeah go ahead and please look twice
there's one in every paradise.

We're living in a land with mountain majesties,
We've got problems vast as seas
And You don't like it
No, you don't like it (no no)

We've got shooting stars and a unicorn,
this is the place where hearts are torn.
Do you like it?
No you don't like it (no no)

We've got a sun that shines day and night,
this is the place we learn to spite.
And you don't like it
No we don't like it (no no)

We're living in a land with mountain majesties,
Rainbows growing out of trees
We've got problems vast as seas
And you like it
But you don't like it (oh no)

We've got shooting stars and a unicorn,
this is the place where love is born
this is the place where hearts are torn.
Do you like it?
No who would like it (oh oh)

We've got a sun that shines day and night,
this is the place where dreams take flight
this is the place we learn to spite.
And you like it
But we don't like it (no no)

I’m the kind of girl that doesnt cry,
I don’t find answers in the sky.
I know what’s real and what’s fake,
What to give and what to take.

I’m the kind of girl who can’t stand sun sets,
I do not have any regrets.
I know what I like and what I hate,
Whats awful and what is great.

I’m the kind of girl that doesn’t hide,
I don’t crawl (no I dont crawl) inside.
I know what stays and what goes,
What is true and what I suppose.

I’m the kind of girl who writes these songs,
I don’t right my wrongs.
I know what I want and what I need,
What’s easy and what will succeed.

(Repeat)